Wednesday 24 May 2017

The Master Storyteller 2017- Golden Category Nominations

The Master Storyteller 2017- Golden Category Nominations

Here are the the stories selected by Ms. Sumaira Hameed and Mr. Shahbaz Ali Naqvi (Shoby) as nominations for Golden Category. Vote for your favorite story.

(Without any specific order)

Pagal Kutta (Sajida Ghulam Mohammad)
Nafs Kusha (Asma Noreen)
Maand Sitara (Ayesha Khan)
Sibghatullah (Huma Shahzad)
Chaand si Bahoo (Subul Huda)
Tawazun (Hina Abrar)
Mehram e Dil (Zeniya Choudary)


Monday 22 May 2017

Mohabbat Mann Mehram (Sumaira Hameed)- Review by Shoby

Mohabbat Mann Mehram (Sumaira Hameed)- Review by Shoby



No this is not a love story, but it is a story about love. About those who give in into it, and the price they pay. And those who run away from it, because they are afraid, or because they do not believe they're worthy of it. She ran away. He gave in. (Film: Original Sin)

If I have to tell you what Mohabbat Mann Mehram is all about, I would say only this, "Massomiyat ki bari qeemat leta hai yeh muashra". Beware this is not an ordinary Romeo-Juliet cheezy love stuff. Sumaira Hameed here, tells us a tale of love, deceit, heart break, stepping up, struggle and getting what you are destined with. With emotions and relationships in the heart of it, Mohabbat Mann Mehram is here to make you cry sometimes with the poor crying Ufaq and smile occasionally on the Bhaand-oriented slapstick one-liners by Farzam.

One prank call can lead towards destruction of not one but many lives. What started off as a silly immature kiddish adventure for Adan (Aman) turned out to be ugly. Ugly enough to ruin the lives of not only innocent Ufaq but also him. They say, Karma has no menu. You get served what you deserve.

Ufaq... You want to know the real meaning of struggle, see how the poor Ufaq tries much more than her capacity to meet the both ends. A teenager who at the tender age of weaving dreams is supporting her widowed mother and two younger brothers. Honestly speaking this specie of girls is scarce (read impossible) to find out in today's society. Call it her bad luck, Cupid did not left even her and she fell in love. Aurat or Mard, Saanjh or Kashish

Teenage is considered to be the most dangerous segment of one's life. No matter how fair & true you are, you cant escape this one emotion. Us ke dil ke darr per awaleen dastak hui or aelaan ban gai. Better to say, she was (dragged) to fall in love with Aman (Adan). Scene where she goes out with him for the first time was written with extreme delicacy. Us ke hath mor pankh huey... Us ka dil tapish hua. And then she considered herself amongst the most unfortunate of the persons when she had to face two catastrophes at once Bewafai ka zakhm... Be'izzati ka daagh.

Talking about Aman who in actual is Adan is what you call a materialistic offspring of a profane father. Mr. Ghulam (his father) is interested only in increasing the count of bucks and as you know greed leads towards the destruction. Someone says, man's needs do not end. When you satisfy one need, another one emerges and the story goes on until you swallow your own self. ALLAH PAK says in QURAN PAK, But he who is greedy and thinks himself self-sufficient, And denies Al-Husna. We will make smooth for him the path to evil. And what will his wealth avail him when he goes down (in destruction). Surah Al-Lail (92:8-11)

What about those who are fair. QURAN PAK says, Corrupt women are for corrupt men, and corrupt men for corrupt women. Good women are for good men, and good men for good women. They are innocent of the calumnies people utter. There shall be forgiveness for them and a generous provision. Surah An-Nur (24:26). 

So after passing through something like hell, Ufaq meets Farzam. Farzam, as the name suggests, was worthy enough to be blessed with Ufaq. Good women are for good men. To me, they both are fortunate enough to be blessed as they were the destiny written for each other. Pious for the pious. See the purity of emotions in the scene where Farzam proposes Ufaq for the first time in the market. It reminded me of the street celebrations scene of Sumaira's epic Yaaram. Beautiful narration indeed.

Ok here is a caution, don't think Mohabbat Mann Mehram as just another love story. In fact, it has so much more to offer to the reader. Through Mohabbat Mann Mehram, Sumiara Hameed tells us the most important lesson which should be learnt by everyone. No matter how difficult the circumstances are, don't give up. Ufaq is a success story and so does Farzam. She came of age from the darkness of poverty, ignorance and disowning to the lights of success & triumph. Who could have expected someone for whom Aman says, Gharon mein bethi larkiyan ker hi kiya sakti hain, siwaey roney or girgira ker dua mangeney ke to achieve an excellent position in the society where she will be going to rescue the likes of Adan. After all, she was one of those kind for whom they say, Woh mangti hai or usey mil jata hai. You know why, because Sirf ALLAH se mangna asaan hota hai. Sirf WOHI de sakta hai.

Sumaira takes an unlikely route of starting the novel with the two characters who went on to become antagonists. Later on, you feel, this story is not about Adan and Maria. They are just the supporting characters with high duty responsibilities on their shoulders to move the story ahead. I liked the way Sumaira used these two supporting characters throughout the story to gain the best of the advantages as far as health of the plot is concerned.

This time from UAE to USA, and from Pakistan to UK, we got to visit several countries. Moral of the story is, whatever you do, wherever you go, at the end of the day it is the one & only #Pakistan that is love, that is life. Sumaira effortlessly changes the gears from UK to Lahore. She portrayed the very real life of central Lahore with utmost authenticity and beauty. After all, Farzam has attended 16 weddings within mere 8 weeks and he has learnt many superlatives that may be reckon as the true identity of this lively city :-)

I am (unintentionally) forced to draw parallel lines of similarities between Yaaram and Mohabbat Mann Mehram. Mrs. Gohar was a synonym to Mama Mehar. Farzam was another version of Aliyaan and Ufaq was undoubtedly the Amraha of Farzam. Lets take it like this, put these characters in the other's shoes and you will be surprised to see the similar sort of reactions. Perfect characterisation by Sumaira Hameed once again.

Sumaira magnificently analysed how society reacts to certain phenomenon. At one side we witnessed the grey shades of the society in the form of the attitudes of Ahmer & his wife, the evil sides of Adan's father and Maria's parents and the treatment of Ufaq's relatives after the death of her father. On another hand, we saw how Mrs. Gohar went on to make Ufaq's family a part of her own family. They say, Being family is determined more by behaviour than blood. 

Gheron ko ikhata ker ke aap ne khandaan bana ,iya hai??? 
Apno ne to khandan banaya hi nahi...

Now coming towards two points that, to me, were the only week components of the story. The foremost one is the nearest to finale part, it seems to be stretched a bit. I don't know, if it was a bit shrink-ed, I feel it would have been much more impact. Secondly, the finale was very much predictable. Off course I am not against these happy endings but somewhere it looked a bit cheesy to me. Having said this, I must say that every author has a game plan to go with and only that specific person (author) knows how to handle the characters and subject.

Overall, Sumaira has once again been successful in delivering some excellent social lessons in this tale of love and relationships. This one is a must-read guys.

Friday 19 May 2017

In Conversation with Aymal Raza- Exclusive Interview in Urdu

In Conversation with Aymal Raza- Exclusive Interview in Urdu

Aap sab ne Aymal Raza ka interview pasand kiya, hum aap ke shuker'guzaar hain. Aap ki farmaish per hum usi interview ko Urdu zaban mein aap ke samney pesh ker rahey hain. Umeed hai, aap ko humari kaawish pasand aey gi...























Tuesday 16 May 2017

In Conversation with Aymal Raza- Exclusive Interview with Shoby

In Conversation with Aymal Raza- Exclusive Interview with Shoby


Shobywood: When did you started writing?

Aymal: I started writing since my childhood at a very tender age. Initially I wrote few stories for children which got published and I received praises for them. Then I shifted towards fiction. My first story for children was published back in the year 2008 for which I got third position in the competition and my first fiction was published in monthly digest Shuaa in 2014.

Shobywood: What is your writing for you?

Aymal: To me, my writing is just an inception and nothing else.

Shobywood: Do you read other writers (the old & new ones). Who is your favourite writer and who inspired you to write?

Aymal: Yes, I have read almost all of the writers, both the new & old ones. In fact I have read so many veteran writers including the likes of Bano Qudsiya, Ashfaq Ahmed, Mumtaz Mumfti, Mohammad Ilyas, Rajindher Singh Bedi, Prem Chand, Manto, Syed Mohammad Ashraf, Ilyas Ahmed, Seeta Devi, Jeelani Bano, Raam Laal, Ismat Chightai, Intezar Hussain and Quratul Ain Haider. Among the young ones, Umer Saeed, Elif Şafak (Elif Shafaq, a Turkish writer) are my personal favourites. Their style of writing inspired me a lot.

As I had a craving for reading books, what should I say that who inspired me the most to write. However, when I read Raja Gidh, somewhere in my mind, it was like some stimulus was triggered. Hence it was decided that I have to write. The more I read Bano Qudiya, the more the decision got firmed. You may say that I have been writing by reading Bano Qudiya’s stories. Her stories taught me how to write.

Shobywood: How do you differentiate the old classical writers with those of our era?

Aymal: There is a lot of difference. Today, people write for earning, and in the mean course, the actual spirit of the story looks like tempered, whereas this phenomenon was not common with the earlier writers. I feel observational & analytical approach has diminished in the new writers. They are neither doing justice with the story nor with the characters.

Shobywood: In your stories, the society is always shown from a specific perspective. Do you like writing stories based on society only?

Aymal: We have so many colours of society. So much so that it always looks lesser in terms of volume, no matter how more we write for it. The society always astonishes us even if we look at it merely as a layman. You may say that I like writing on society. But its not like this that I want only to portray the society through my writing. The human psyche attracts me too. I love to write fantasy, horror, suspense. I don't want to be stereotyped. I am open towards all the innovation, tradition and periodic of creation.

Shobywood: The characters in your stories are always living and relate-able and yet you always connect them with the art of every corner of this world, just like what you did in Taveez e Hubb. Do you plan it before writing that you have to place certain elements in your story?

Aymal: You can say, yes, up to an extent. Actually there are diverse types of stories. For instance, there is a type of story what Manto sb used to pen and now we have the type of stories which we have to present after proper ornamentation. You have to embed certain essential ingredients. This is sometimes need of the hour and sometimes it is just a thirst of doing something unorthodox. Plus, I like if my characters are not stagnant. I like if they continue doing their bits. They should be engaged with different fields of the world. They should belong to various countries of the world. Doing so, the readers gets to know about new things of the world.

Shobywood: Your characters evolve after grasping so much of pain. I should rephrase it, they in fact re-discover themselves after going through some intense circumstances. From where you bring this much of pain & intensity in the characters?

Aymal: These are mere characters which are revealed to the imagination and then get transferred to the paper in the form of writing. To tell you honestly, I have nothing much to do in this regard. I feel, if you have pre-planned the pain or any certain phenomenon given to a specific character, it is fabrication. It looks artificial. To me, It is an atrocity with the characters. I believe, characters themselves tell you how to treat them.

Shobywood: Your character sketches & dialogues are very different from other writers and often they have a visible colour of foreign authors. Similarly, you use multi-cultural & multi-ethnic philosophy in your writings. Do you implement these things intentionally?

Aymal: I have read more of my own domestic literature more than others. My novel Taveez e Hubb has an influence of Umer Saeed’s Safaal Ger and it is not something unintentional. When I read Safaal Ger, I felt that it is an altogether fresh & new way to project in the field of novel writing. Then I decided to write my own novel on the same pattern. That is why I wrote Taveez e Hubb in the style of Safaal Ger.

In my other stories, you will feel a touch of Bano Qudiya’s works. I have learnt writing by reading her stories. She is my spiritual teacher. I feel there is a visible impact of her writing in my writings. I have an in-depth focus on dialogues, characterisation and projection. I think these three components are the backbone of any story.

Shobywood: Recently your novel Main, Mohabbat or Tum was published. This time, you chose to write a bit different than your usual style of writing. It was nice to see you with a soft romantic sort of read. But you are actually famous for stories like Taveez e Hubb and Piyaal Saaz. What sort of writing you enjoy the most?

Aymal: I like writing the likes of Piyaal Saaz and Taveez e Hubb but I think if you the reader will get bored if you keep on writing in the same pattern regularly. Earlier, writers had a specific school of thought and they used to write on one single pattern throughout the career. Bano Qudsiya was more into writing about human psyche. Ashfaq Ahmed has made the society his field of study. Mumtaz Mufti, Ismat Chughtai, in fact all of them write on one pattern. And the interesting thing is, this phenomenon is not only prevailing in our literature, in fact the foreign writers have also used one domain to write on. But if we look at the newly growing breed of writers, we can see that they are attempting multiple styles. A very recent example for the same is Elif Şafak who used altogether different writing approaches in Namoos and Ishq Ke Chalees Asool. Sumaira Hameed of Khawateen Digest is another excellent example. Her novels Borshay, Ishq Amad o Mann, Yaaram all have been written in diverse styles and all of them are fantastic reads. I like comedy but I prefer to write tragedy.

Shobywood: Are your stories always a fiction or are they inspired from the reality?

Aymal: All of my stories are always fiction albeit one character of Piyaal Saaz (i.e. Misbah). This character is a real one, not only the name but also in its fate.

I have not yet written any story based on a real incidence but the characters I use are very relate-able and they are taken from the living society. Whatever you witness or read is always getting stored in your mind. When you perceive an idea about a story, then all the relevant phenomenon arrives with the same. Considering this thing, we can say that the pure fiction is also not a “complete perfect fiction”. It has some true components of society as well.

Shobywood: One thing that is specific to your stories is the absence of traditional hero-heroine stuff. I feel, you always sketch the story with real hard hitting author backed characters and script is always your real hero. Do you believe in the traditional hero-heroine thing or not?

Aymal: Everyone has a distinct style of writing. I feel, hero- heroine are not necessary for a story, it is more essential to have pivotal and I always give this “pivotal” component the most important place in the story. This “pivotal” can be anything. Hope, Courage, Will, Spark, Enlightening, Struggle, anything.

I am not saying that do not write stories with traditional hero-heroine sagas. Those who want to write, they are most welcome to write whatever they enjoy. Those who don’t want to attempt this, they should not. We have so many diverse topics in the world that even if you does not write on traditional hero-heroine stuff, you are still not short of the topics.

Shobywood: People have almost stopped reading now a days. Is it because we are short of good writers or readers?

Aymal: To be honest, we have shortage of both. However I feel we are more short of good readers today. Yes it is true that good writing is difficult to find in today’s literature, but look people do not read the classical old stuff too. Habit of reading is scarce now and libraries are getting desolated. Recently I was talking to the librarian of Punjab Library. He was saying that earlier we used to issue 1000 book on an average daily and now the quantity has dropped to 50 or 60. It is my own experience as well. Seven, eight years ago, I had to wait for one or two hours to get a book issued and now my heart gets lonely having seen these libraries vacant. Librarians are getting bored of no business and books are looking someone to come and collect them. There are many factors behind this, but I think misuse of latest technology has made us slack. We are doing worse with our own selves by giving a secondary thing the more priority.

Shobywood: Recently you launched your book Sooraj Ke Paar in the last year. What do you want to say about the book? What was the reaction of public and critics?

Aymal: Sooraj ke Paar is my fiction collection. I am delighted on its launch as it was already decided that my first book would be dedicated to my beneficent Ms. Umma tus Saboor. So with the launch of the book, my dream came true.

The fiction stories available in the book were already published in digest and I have always garnered praises over the same. Wherever I have received positive criticism, I have always tried to make my writing better.

Shobywood: How seriously you take the take of critics regarding your work? If someone’s take hurt you, how you react to them?

Aymal: Feedback is important but I shall write what I feel like writing. You can say that I am a bit stubborn in writing. I shall not modify my style or plot of the story on someone else’s recommendation.

I have not mind anyone’s feedback till date. However sometimes, we come across sort of a feedback based on a single point, without understanding the actual spirit & essence of the story. Then I wonder why something is getting criticised which is not actually endorsed in the story.

Shobywood: Do you like writing for films or dramas?

Aymal: Off course. I like to write both however my foremost priority is novel writing.

Shobywood: Which is your most favourite character and why?

Aymal: The Nigaar of Piyaal Saaz. There are many reason which I would not like to disclose.

Shobywood: Which of your story or character you would love to see developed into a film or drama?

Aymal: For the time being, I guess no one. I wouldn’t allow any of my characters to be dramatised considering the prevailing conditions of our domestic dramas are not suitable enough. Dramas that are being made in our country is plagued with hast.

Shobywood: If Aymal Raza was not a writer, what she would have been?

Aymal: Aymal was bound to be a writer no matter what. Only if ALLAH PAK has destines something else for me.

Shobywood: What sort of writing you personally enjoy the most and what do you wish to write?

Aymal: I like to write tragedy novels. And I want to write almost every sort of thing. Horror, suspense, fantasy, romance, classical literature, Itinerary almost every known genre of writing.

Shobywood: Short Fiction or Novel? Which one is more difficult to write?

Aymal: I think fiction is more difficult. It is immensely difficult to elaborate the wholesomeness of something with all its charm within few strokes. I think once you are done with short fiction, it becomes easier to write a novel. But after novel, you can get assistance for only writing a story and you have to once again strive to go back from a story to fiction. This is my own perspective.

Shobywood: Your fans want to know that you have not come up with an episodic after Piyaal Saaz. For how long they have to wait for this?

Aymal: Novel itself tells us, when it has to be emerged on the papers. It itself gives you an insight that the time has come for its existence. If something sparks in your mind, it starts triggering you. It ends up having penned. It itself gives a material entity to its spirit. Writer has to complete it as soon as possible. It has only one other aspect that you keep on waiting with story sketches in your mind for the right time.

Shobywood: What are your hobbies other than writing?

Aymal: I have many hobbies. I love painting. I do this in my free times, which are usually not available. I like music too. I like singers of Lebanon & Turkey. I like the songs of Adam, Umer Wahab, Nancy Ajzam, Haifa, Serence, Muraad. I also like cooking but since I have started writing, I have not tried anything new. There are many other hobbies as well.

Shobywood: Shobywood is the only Pakistani blog where Poetry & other forms of literature are also getting ample limelight along with film & entertainment industry. What would you like to say about my blog?

Aymal: It is a very positive blog. We can make social media productive but not much is being done in this regard here. We have only a handful of Urdu websites whereas our neighbouring country is far more ahead of us in this aspect. It is astonishing to see that they have so many personal channels. We all should focus and do some combine effort for the same. Shobywood is an excellent step in this regard.

Shobywood: Any message for your fans?

Aymal: Work hard and do it with such a passion that your work reaches to the premium heights. Learn how to smile and forgive. Doing so, not only the life will be become easier but also you will achieve tangible success. Always belive on your struggle. Remember this quote of IMAM ALI (asws):

Ho Sakta hai aap ki qismat aap ka saath na de lakin aap ko aap ki mehnat ka phal na miley, yeh nahi ho sakta.

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Monday 8 May 2017

Shobywood Revamped... A New Phase Starts Now

Shobywood Revamped... A New Phase Starts Now


At Shobywood, we aim to bring a positive soft image of our beloved homeland #Pakistan in front of the world and Alhamdo LILLAH we have been successful in doing so by promoting our very own artists especially poets & other writers.

As you know Shobywood is currently the only live blog in Pakistan that has brought to you news, views, reviews & exclusive interviews from the famous personalities & awesome writers from all over Pakistan along with reviews by film & literature critic Shahbaz Ali Naqvi (Shoby) on International TV Shows (seasons), Novels and various movies. Now, we have decided to move one step ahead. 

Now we commit to bring more entertainment value for our readers by introducing fresh activities on our official Facebook page @Shobywood and on the blog. The very first step in bringing the freshness is the induction of our brand new Admin team that comprises of Ms. Quandeel Qamar and Ms. Zuhra Khalid. Both of them are excellent professionals and we believe they will surely bring in more innovation in their respective roles.

It is pertinent to mention here that we are here for you and we need your usual support in this regard. We highly encourage you to be part of @Shobywood by providing your valuable feedback and projecting your innovative ideas regarding what sort of posts you want to see in the page. We are open to your ideas. Inbox us your suggestions at our Official Facebook page @Shobywood

We look forward to your participation.

Saturday 6 May 2017

Sheher'Zaad (Saima Akram Choudary)- Episode 5 Review by Shoby

Sheher'Zaad (Saima Akram Choudary)- Episode 5 Review by Shoby

SHOCKING... Saima Akram Ch. hits hard to surprise all of us by this twist. After what happened with Sandel in Noor Mehal, she had no other option but to commit suicide. Unfortunately it is almost impossible to imagine the trauma people like Sandal has to face. I have no words but I think Albert Camus sums it of quite precisely, “But in the end one needs more courage to live than to kill himself.” Looks like something is rather a bigger dilemma than Sandal committing suicide and that is the reaction and post-suicidal actions of the residents of Meer House.

Sandel has gone but before that she has (apparently) revealed the secret behind her suicidal attempt and Tuba is the one who knows why she has committed it. Mard ko mohabbat sirf aurat ke wajood se hoti hai or kisi se nahi. Tuba talks straight to Shah Meer while both of them were chasing ghost of Sandal. 

William Shakespeare said, "Suspicion always haunts the guilty mind". Needless to say that what Wahaj has done, his hideous crime will not allow him to sleep well in nights.

Rumaisa is missing and the unknown Humzaad is back to help Sheherzaad but again without disclosing the identity. Irtaza Haider is investigating the case of missing Rumi. While he meets with Sherry, he shows his liking for her, which Sherry opens in front of Humzaad who is a bit angry over her.

Saima Akram Choudary opens a new window. Monica is soon to embrace the true religion Islam as Zulkifl has become the ray of hope for her. 

What else you can except from the extra extrovert Dur e Shehwar. She has called Hadi to confess her love for him which has enraged him. Isn't it really a "NEWS" that he too loves someone... Someone else obviously.

Anabiya joins the same university as that of Burhan and she is excited. After all, she was going to be associated with Burhan but he has readily diminished all of her excitement. He asked her not to reveal his Nikah in front of anyone and focus on studies instead of being social. 

Episode ends with Rumi being abducted in a farm house and everyone in the surroundings heard a loud gun fire.

As expected, this one was a bigger episode with some real twists. It feels like it is just a matter of few more episode that identity of Humzaad will be revealed. The little cameo of Monica & Zulkifl has recalled the memory of first ever scene of the first episode of the novel. This couple has something to do with that train incident, I reckon. Let's see where the story heads in future.

Raqsam (Aymal Raza)- Episode 2 Review by Shoby

Raqsam (Aymal Raza)- Episode 2 Review by Shoby

Brody: You alright?
Carrie: Are you?
(Starts raining)
Brody: Dont leave me like this... All alone... In the rain...
Carrie: You will be fine...

#Homeland #Season1

Remember the first emotional meeting of Brody and Carrie in Homeland? While reading how Ajram came close to Minaal reminded me of that and obviously I am taking too much leverage in saying this.

Minaal meets Ajram and this guy knows every known trick in the books to lure the audience. No matter how talkative you are, there is one damn person in the world who possess the power to make you silent. A silence that speaks much louder than noise. Pakistan mein sab isey kehtey they ke is ki zaban qainchi ki tarha chalti hai... Ajram ki to kai so qainchiyon ki tarha chal rahi thi

Some people believe it to be their utmost duty to make you realise that you are still one step behind them in the game. Minaal gets a project of interior decor and the night of the celebrations turned into yet another evening of sorrow when she saw Doris walking on the ramp, making Sikander proud.  It was her night and she was there to get the credit of every great thing but the things are changed. Sikander was also present there and obviously he was also happy to see Minaal's success but taste of the victory has turned sour as Doris has stolen the scene with a big wicked smile on her face. Meanwhile it can be clearly seen that somewhere within herself, ice is melting for Minaal binte Surayya.

So Minaal is melting not only for her father but also for Ajram. He is marking quite a visible stamp on her. Pyara hona bohat acha lagta hai, khas tor per tab jab kisi ko laga jaey... Love has the tendency to modify you. It literally can. Same is happening to our grief struck enraged girl. She has finally found a buddy.

Now lets us pause here for a while and discuss Ajram. This happy go lucky, all goes well nice charming uni fellow likes street dancing and therefore he is learning dance from the instructor Saint. I feel his character is something like that of Aman from Kal Ho Na Ho. The more he provides the fun element to the story, the more it looks like that he is going to reveal a deadly disastrous news soon. 

On the street festival, Ajram gifts her a traditional Greek Garland. On that very night, Sikander confesses all the bad, he has done with Surayya and her children. They are coming nearer. She is becoming happier. And then all of the sudden everything got changed. 

Us ki aankhen weeran ho gai... Sara sheher weeran ho gaya. Seems like Ajram is deliberately avoiding her for unknown reasons citing various lame excuse of being abroad for a short film and then came the biggest twist in the story. Ajram asks her for a dinner and there she found him, not as her boy friend, but as the (proclaimed) fiance of none other than Doris.

Hats off to Aymal for switching gears and going back-forth by making some real interesting twists in the plot. First she managed so well to divert the focus of the readers from a revenge filled Minaal-Sikander saga to a little warm Minaal- Ajram love story and then just with a mere click, she turned the tables once again and beautifully shifted the focus to the same old siblings hate/-revenge drama. Apparently Doris has acquired the very best (in fact the only) of what Minaal had.

From the story-line, I am getting a feel that this one seems to be getting unzipped in a nice smooth manner. Aymal is this time effortlessly telling us a tale in simplest of the manners. She is not trying to do anything extra and just focusing on producing a fairly fluent narrative. I am  predicting a happily living ever after sort of finale with a touch of family drama at the end. Let's wait and watch what is coming next in Raqsam.

Friday 5 May 2017

Haalim (Nemrah Ahmed)- Episode 1 Review by Shoby

Haalim (Nemrah Ahmed)- Episode 1 Review by Shoby



Grace Van Pelt: [watching Jane perform a magic trick with his straw] How'd you do that? 
Patrick Jane: Telekinesis. 
Kimball Cho: He blew on it. 
Patrick Jane: That is another way to do it.

"The Mentalist"

Welcome to Kuala Lumpur (KL)- The capital of scenic Malaysia. Kuala is the point where two rivers join together and Lumpur means "mud", so Kuala Lumpur literally means "muddy confluence". The time has arrived to dive deep somewhere into the "Conflulence of Muddy Water".

She is a pitch perfect con-artist. He is the future president of Malaysia. Nothing unifies them except the one same trait. They both are dreamers, clairvoyant. Oscar Wilde said, "A dreamer is one who can only find his way by moonlight, and his punishment is that he sees the dawn before the rest of the world". No one knows the dawn both of them have to see before the world watches it.

Nemrah Ahmed, this time tells us a story of two "almost" meta-humans (something like Cisco of The Flash). They can foresee whats coming next and they can interpret what they have dreamt off. Well obviously, their predictions does not always come true and sometimes they misinterpret but most of the times they stand winners. 

Taliya Binte Muraad is a mystery damsel and so does the charismatic Fateh bin Ramzel. Both of them are the passengers of two diverse journeys but GOD knows better, a day will come when one mutual destiny will unite them. Wait for the Fate, I say...

Taliya makes a perfect team of scam artists along with Danti and together they have achieved quite a success in the business. Haalim, the novel starts off with the lucrative execution of 11th job of Taliya (aka Haalim) as she categorically deceives the likes of Muliya and Anwer. After the successful completion of the job, it goes on to declare that (disguised) Haalim is ready for one last heist, the grand finale of all, the very last expedition that can turn the lives of these two 360 degrees. 

Just like near to the anti-climax of a crime drama, Taliya wants to settle down after this one last quest. She wants to earn a big bounty and live peacefully for the rest of the life but Plan kiya gaya gunaah kabhi akhri gunaah nahi ban sakta. Once you are in the business, you need to be there till the very end. There is no quitting here.

On the other hand, the other dreamer Fateh bin Ramzel is a poised politician with a vision of A Better Malaysia. He is hypnotic and a loved by masses. He has class, elegance, wit and every written trait of a larger than life personality. So we can say that apparently, instead of one, we have two "Haalim" (dreamers) to start of with.

What is the game plan for Haalim as a last swindle. She wants to steal a key available in the form of a set of bracelet and a coin. This will give her the earning for a lifetime and no points for guessing that both of these products are available at Fateh's place. So plan is pretty much simple. Its time for Taliya to enter his house and steal the things. The things like how and when are still to be responded by Haalim.

First episode of #Haalim is over and canvas is set for a high voltage thriller. Nemrah has taken a different route this time. Story seems to be highly inspired from several TV mystery thrillers. It is not wrong to say that this type of story is not yet attempted in mainstream digest writing in Pakistan. Script looks juicy and undoubtedly has an ocean to explore with a touch of mystery and politics involved in the epicentre of it.

Considering the fact that this was just a pilot episode of the novel, Nemrah has put on quite a remarkable effort in engaging the reader with the proceedings. The best thing about the first episode was its being pacey and interesting. Although she has chosen quite a complex premises this time, but she has done exceptionally well to keep the things real simple & digest-able for every reader. Somewhere I feel, the dialogues were somewhat lacking the real Nemrah's throw power. Hope to see the same old hard hitting Nemrah back soon.

Nemrah is no doubt a trend setter and she is one of those who know how to make a benchmark and how to surpass it in order to create a new one. People are still in awe of Namal and it would require more of a hard work to get over the Namal fever. I feel second episode is crucial as it will establish the actual point standing of Haalim.