Showing posts with label Aymal Raza. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Aymal Raza. Show all posts

Sunday, 1 December 2019

Mujasma Saaz (Aymal Raza)- Fiction Review by Shoby

Mujasma Saaz (Aymal Raza)

Fiction Review by Shahbaz Ali Naqvi (Shoby)

Victor Hugo said, "There is a sacred horror about everything grand. It is easy to admire mediocrity and hills; but whatever is too lofty, a genius as well as a mountain, an assembly as well as a masterpiece, seen too near, is appalling." So what does it take to make a masterpiece, something that comes out of your inner side, being an artist, while going through a phase of Writer's Block (read Artist's Block). Aymal Raza has this time explored a different genre, which deals with complexities of human nature as well as relationship of two mutually exclusive human beings.

It is so true that every artist, regardless of the genre of art, has to tell a story and every artistic piece is a complete story of something. Mujasma'saaz is a definite cry of the writer over the gray shades of an artist. Marvin Gaye said, “Great artists suffer for the people.” I believe, one cannot be a true artist unless he has a specific pattern of feelings & emotions for other creations and the responsibility increases even more when the other creation is of GOD's. How can one dare to claim to be an artist, if he does not have the compassion for others, no matter, how great your (so called) artist emerges out to be in front of the world.

Analyzing the two pertinent character of Aymal Raza's Mujasma'saaz, we get to see two altogether different set of personalities. "Mujasma'saaz" is shown as a shrewd Carver, who can go to any extreme just for the sake of creating a perfect creation. On the other hand, "Rustam", the carver's servant, is depicted as a symbol of devotion. 

Rustam, who once used to enjoy the premium status of being the most trusted person of Mujasma'saaz falls right from the sky to the bottom of all the Earths, when a beautiful scripture gets broken down, courtesy his little extra love. This leads to leash an inhuman face of the mujasma'saaz which ultimately ends at the fatal fate of Rustam. You can feel a very unusual feeling of love and emotional attachment of Rustam with Mujasma'saaz but as Debolina Bhawal said, “Never fall for anyone. It's only sadness that is gifted by them to you in your rest of the life. Kills the loving person inside you.” This happens in this very case. 

Talking about the narrative part of the fiction, it is a short but comprehensive take. Considering the fact that it was written for monthly Suspense digest, the fiction had overall feel of a mystery but it has the signature of Aymal Raza. Somewhere in the proceedings, you feel this time Aymal was a bit short of producing the mind blowing one-liners in a big number, which she is undoubtedly capable of writing. I feel, the writer is immensely inspired by Auguste Rodin's sculpture "The Thinker" as she has once again used it in this writing. (I guess she has used the same somewhere earlier too. Apologies, if I am wrong). The name of both sculptures "Khamoshi" and "Pashemaani" were awesome and went good with overall theme of the story, which to me was more Noir than sad. However, keeping the story intact with exactly two protagonists with just a glimpse of a side character (to make a narrative more strong) was the winning factor of the story. 

Tuesday, 15 May 2018

Bari Bi (Aymal Raza)- Fiction Review by Shoby

Bari Bi (Aymal Raza)- Fiction Review by Shahbaz Ali Naqvi (Shoby)



Khali khaney to wesey bhi bari jaldi pur ho jatey hain... Log marr jatey hain or zinda log bari jaldi un ki jagah le jatey hain...

Honestly speaking, while reading this almost four page tale, I was constantly wondering, why someone like Aymal Raza will put so much of brainstorming for this very mediocre looking fiction but when I reached the ultimate finale, sort of a satisfaction bowled me over, as Aymal has never disappointed me in giving the much needed message for the masses and that too without being preachy at all. 

Kaam to ho hi jatey hain... Unhon ne zindagi ko ibadat mein kiyo na lagaya... Farz Namazon ko qaza kiyo kiya... Kamon ki to qaza ho gai... Ab ibadat ki qaza kon kerey ga.

And among the people there is he who sells himself for the pleasure of ALLAH, and ALLAH is kind to HIS worshippers. (The Holy Quran 2:207)

I feel, Bari Bi is a true symbolic representation of most of us. It is an established fact that we all have made our life schedules so busy that at times, we don't even realise, what we are sacrificing in order to achieve something. Time, my friends is something that is literally slipping out of our hands and the dilemma is, we are not at all realising.

Busy, as we are, hell busy, in our daily domestic & professional lives. And if we were anyhow somewhat fortunate enough to have some (time), this social media has taken it back from us. Giving you an example, just imagine for a few moments, how we and our elders used to spend Ramzan ul Mubarak. Obviously, their prime concern was to observe fast, offer Namaz timely and regular recitation of QURAN PAK but now look back for may be 5 to 10 years, the situation is totally changed.

You may agree or not, but the fact is that now, our routine in Ramzan has totally changed. Most of the time, we find ourselves either sleeping or wasting time in tech gadgets (courtesy social media) or watching some really meaningless TV shows, which have done nothing but made our nation a beggar.

I feel the whole concept behind Aymal Raza's Bari Bi was to give us all a jolt of 440 W, in order to make us realise that time is going, steadily and hastily and we are losing the most beautiful moments of the biggest blessing of ALLAH PAK (i.e. life). 

It doesn't mean that one should stop doing the domestic & other stuff at all. Obviously, Islam is the religion of nature and it totally understands the need & requirements of we, the human beings. It is completely allowed (in fact appreciated) to work for your livelihood (Rizq e Halal), doing domestic work is also not prohibited but not at all at the cost of ignoring Namaz and other Ibadaat, as prescribed in Islam.

Taking Bari Bi as an example, let us all ask ourselves the trillion dollar question. Why are we wasting our lives in unnecessary doings. And one more thing, now if we have really realised that were on the losing side, shouldn't we now focus on the purpose of our existence. Remember ALLAH PAK says in QURAN PAK:

And I did not create the jinn and mankind except to worship ME.(The Holy Quran 51:56)

There cannot be any other time better than this to make a resolution to our own selves. Let us all commit to ourselves that we shall make Ramzan ul Mubarak the best Ramzan ul Mubarak of our lives. We shall decorate our days & nights with Som o Salaat. We shall pray for the betterment of mankind. We shall all try to have the colour of Ramzan ul Mubarak on our inner selves and will try to make its mark on our whole life. 

Remember, these Namaz & other Ibadaat are our requirements, not HIS. If we don't follow what ALLAH wants and doesn't obey HIS commands, HE surely will punish us for sure. Remember, HE can create much better creations than us. HE is the one who made us Ashraf ul Makhlooqaat and HE is HIMSELF THE ONE AND ONLY AHSAN ul KHALIQEEN.

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Sunday, 8 October 2017

Surkh Aandhi (Aymal Raza)- Fiction Review by Shoby

Surkh Aandhi (Aymal Raza)- Fiction Review by Shahbaz Ali Naqvi (Shoby)



“What is it, dear?” asked Sue.
“Six,” said Johnsy, in a voice still lower. “They’re falling faster now. Three days ago there were almost a hundred. It hurt my head to count them. But now it’s easy. There goes another one. There are only five now.”
“Five what, dear? Tell your Sue.”
“Leaves. On the tree. When the last one falls, I must go, too. I’ve known that for three days. Didn’t the doctor tell you?”

The Last Leaf (O Henry)

What makes this world an impossible place to live in? Yes, you guessed it right. It is the wickedness of these dangerous social animals that takes away the peace & prosperity of the planet and in return, gives a devastation that cannot be repaired in any case. In this materialistic world of people filled with severe greed, It is considered as a real taboo to love in its purest form. Hardly we have seen a couple surviving in this selfish arena. Aymal Raza gives us a taste of a handful of different global literature and projects the master plan beautifully to present a heart touching story of a mother whose only daughter Shaano was unluckiest enough to find a path which no one survives in totality. “So it’s true, when all is said and done, grief is the price we pay for love.”  E.A. Bucchianeri (Brushstrokes of a Gadfly)

It happens by luck that Shaano dives deeply in the love of Akram who by chance belongs to the clan of enemy. Let me pause you here for a while and share with you one of my most favorite scenes from Sir Sanjay Leela Bhansali's Raam-Leela, which to me suits here the most.

Tu mujh se pyar mat ker lena... Rajjari hoon main... Dusman...
Dusman... Tabhi to ankhen lar rahi thi baar baar

Coming back towards Surkh Aandhi, as the story progresses, you will observe that you are not at all reading a Desi version of Romeo & Juliet. In fact, there is so much more in the heart of the plot to explore. Courtesy, the ever-occurring phenomenon of greed & selfishness, Shaano's brothers were bothered more for her very existence rather than to look upon the act she has committed (i.e. felling in love). The relationship that sprang between Shaano & Akram paved a way for them to make the penultimate decision. After all, it is the Zarr, Zann & Zameen that becomes the seed of the war globally. How karma plays its part and what happens next must be read in this 10 odd page fiction.

I feel Surkh Aandhi is a strong comeback of Aymal Raza. It shows the real power that the writer posses when it comes to producing gem of a product. See how beautifully, she has shown the actual face of our ruler life where people are still living a stone-age life. They still fight ruthless wars over non-issues and women creed for them is just another entity that can be used wherever the utilization is demanded.

It is true that they don't bury the daughters now, but they wait for them to grow up and then kills them even more brutally, as the fate of the female fraternity has not changed after achieving this much so called civilization. Pakkey phal ki rakhwali is ke aghaz se bhi zeyada kerni parti hai... It tells us what the mothers have to go in these ruthless circumstances. Bayahi maa ko phir se kanwari honey jaisi fikrey hi to laga deti hain yeh betiyan....

Apart from the strong subject matter handling, Surkh Aandhi is a treat for those who love to collect quotes from the reads. Aymal surprised after every two or three lines with a spectacular heavy punch line. A couple of my picks are mentioned here:

So jangey haar jaaney jitna matam us ki ankhoin se ayan hota tha...

Kaashi koi qismat ko jaan sakta... Phir na doodh se jalta, na chaj ko phoon marta...

One particular thing that makes the story stand out from the cluster was the symbolical portrayal of subject, that is managed so well by the author. See how smoothly she depicted all the grief & sorrow of the plot symbolically with the condition of the pomegranate tree. Throughout the story, the tree remained a firm source of symbolism. No, its not another The Last Leaf. It is a well orchestrated thought that has a solid reasoning & heavy brainstorming involved in it.

My verdict, Surkh Aandhi is Aymal's genuine take on classics like The Last Leaf and Romeo & Juliet, with a much needed twist in the epicenter of the story. You may argue that there was nothing much new in the proceedings as far as the subject is concerned, however as far as the narrative & storytelling is concerned, to me, Surkh Aandhi emerges as a clear winner.

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Sunday, 10 September 2017

Faisla (Episode 1)- TV Show Review by Shoby

Faisla (Episode 1)- TV Show Review by Shahbaz Ali Naqvi

When trust is broken, the relationship fails to prevail. Faisla, the debut written TV serial of Aymal Raza kicked off last week on ARY Digital with a double episode. In this inaugural episode of Faisla, the whole focus was on the character of Maryam (Sonia Mishal), who is shown truly madly deeply in love with her husband Umair (Ali Abbas) and how their love marriage concludes in a devastating manner in the form of a divorce, courtesy Umair's extra marital relationship with another girl. It was also told in the script that all this was a by-product of Maryam's nature where she was always in doubt with respect to Umair's behavior. Meanwhile we are also introduced with Asad's  (Gohar Mumtaz) love for Maryam who belongs to relatively lower class as compared to rich birds Umair & Maryam.

So considering it as a introductory episode of the play, let me tell you that the serial was much successful in building a strong premise for the story. Seems like Asad will be able to turn the table in his favor, considering Maryam is now divorced. In the acting department, Sonia has done a fabulous job. Right from the first frame, where she was shown cutting (read destroying) her wedding anniversary's cake to the scene where Umair gives her the divorces, she was at her very best in almost every scene. The best thing about this acting was, her being natural. Ali Abbas & Gohar were good in bits. I like Ali's conversation with his mother post divorce. Waseem Abbas & Saba Hameed are seasoned actors and they have surely implanted a positive energy through their acting prowess.

Coming towards the story, it was a signature start of Aymal. We all know, whenever she writes episodic, the first episode starts & ends like this very way. She shows her characters in agony & pain and then eventually re-evolves her characters and bring them back to life. Maryam is presented in the same affliction which we are used to of observing in Aymal's characters (Nigaar in Piyaal Saaz & Bianca in Taveez e Hubb).

Aymal tried to keep the things simple & self explainatory in the innaugural episode. She never looked in a hurry to tell what she was up to. Dialogues were natural and much related to our daily routine life. I expect some solid punches in upcoming episodes from Aymal, the type of dialogues she is famous for. However we have seen a glimpse of it in, Maaon ko weham nahi, ilhaam hotey hain...

Aymal is famous for giving unorthodox titles to her writings. This time, we have seen rather a traditional one (i.e. faisla). I feel, may be this is so, because the word Faisla (decission) is going to be the key factor in the script. But as a regular reader of her, somewhere in my mind, I was perhaps looking forward for something more out of the box.

One thing is for sure that Aymal is going to show us the glimpses from the past in flashbacks and in this regard, we shall get to see the warm romantic side of the story. We all know, Aymal is at her prime best in writing both the feelingsof pain & romance. People still cherish the exceptional conversations which took place between Basil and Zimel in Piyaal Saaz.

Upcoming episodes will unfold the story more. Leaving you with two questions to answer. What will Umair do now, after divorcing Maryam and how will Maryam reacts over the same, once the things move further.

Friday, 11 August 2017

Faisla by Aymal Raza- Exclusive Feature at Shobywood

Faisla by Aymal Raza- Exclusive Feature by Shahbaz Ali Naqvi (Shoby)



She started her writing carrier with monthly Shuaa in 2014 with a short fiction and within a few years, she has established her name as one of the most sought after writers of the digest world. She needs no further introduction as she is our very own favorite writer Aymal Raza. With a handful of fictions and some path breaking novels, she is recognized as an unorthodox entrepreneur as far as the digest writing is concerned. After gaining immense fame & popularity in digest writing field, she is all set to enter the grand area of commercial TV with her debut project tentatively tiled as Faisla.

Talking exclusively to Shobywood, Ms. Aymal confirmed that she will stick true to the roots of her writing values and her first drama serial Faisla will be based on social issues. Star cast of the serial includes the likes of Sonia Mishal, Ali Abbas, Goher Mumtaz and veteran actors Waseem Abbas & Saba Hameed. and it is going to be aired on ARY from September 5, 2017 under the banner of IDream, produced by Abdullah Seja. The said serial has directed by Syed Ramis Rizvi.

Our drama industry is currently plagued with the same old school saas-bahu sagas . Most of the serials are highly inspired from the fake glitz & glamour of Indian industry and barely we see anything interesting. We, at Shobywood, believe that with the entry of these excellent writers such as Aymal, our drama industry will surely get fresh ideas and we will get to see new dimensions in our serials. 

Shobywood wishes all the luck to the writer and the complete team of Faisla for super success of the project.

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Friday, 2 June 2017

Raqsam (Aymal Raza)- Novel Analysis by Shoby

Raqsam (Aymal Raza)- Novel Analysis by Shahbaz Ali Naqvi (Shoby)


Shuru shuru mein jab khawab toot'tey hain to bohat bechaini hoti hai... Phir adat ho jati hai... Tootney or bechain rehney ki...

Her mother became habitual of absorbing pain and it was looking like if the same was destined for her too but at the end of the day, sun was all set to shower her shines on her. It is curtains on Aymal Raza's Raqsam and Manaal binte Surayya stands out victorious.

This three episodic novel is once again an excellent tragedy written by Aymal and I must say, Aymal knows the recipe of writing a perfect tragedy. Although she introduced many characters in the novel but to me, Raqsam was all about these powerful characters, Manaal, Sikander, Doris and Ajram, having Manaal stealing the limelight. Let us explore these characters first.

Raqsam's plot revolves around Manaal and this character has every trait of Taveez e Hub's Bianca. You will feel the same rage, anger, a wish to take revenge and a heart that lasts for love but the game time plays with both of them is almost the same. Ignoring the phenomenon they both went rhough, one can easily replace these two characters and the reaction would be surprisingly same. 

Manaal was deprived of love and she was all revenge on account of this. But when she realised that in the course of having a revenge based saga, she is going nowhere, she just left everything, even herself. Gerard Way said, “Sometimes you have to kind of die inside in order to rise from your own ashes and believe in yourself and love yourself to become a new person.” She almost did the same.

They say, we the humans are not wrong all the time, rather time makes us do silly wrong things. Sikander is a perfect example of this. He was never meant to make Suraya's life hell but this happens when someone craves for love which is not meant for him/ her. Suraya's wish ruined her. Not only her but her children too along with many others in long lasting canvas.

When I was studying character of Doris, I was constantly thinking that even if I don't take it as a standalone character specifically designed for this novel, this is a pure reflection of what we human beings are in reality. The pseudo-gods, as we perceive ourselves. We all, in one way or another feel ourselves as highest & best of all others. We don't allow anyone to fee free in our presence and we never give space to anyone.. We wish to obtain each & everything and we don't bother if something gets hurt or destroyed in the course of this. We just have to feed our own selves. I liked the much needed transition of this character in the end though.

Coming towards Ajram's character, it was complex. At one hand, he is that one happy-go-lucky chap, a blue eyed who can steal the heart of anyone and on anther hand, he was all set to deceit someone without having a second thought. May be this is also another grey aspect of human psyche. A bit disappointment was the treatment with this characters in the end. I feel, this one character could have been handled much better in the final half, considering how it was introduced with a bang in the second half.

Aymal has written a smooth plot this time with a much expected finale but the actual juice of the story lies in the heart of the script. Its all about karma and she has shown the very real of it in these sequences. Whatever has happened to each of these characters was a part of karma but we should not leave it to karma only. Wayne Dyer said, "How people treat you is their karma; how you react is yours." Food for thought!

Fortune makes us check diverse taste of life. There are moments when we laugh out loud and moments when we cry our hearts full. One should not only focus on the negative vibes that encircles him, instead he should keep on looking for those beautiful tiny moments that can have a miraculous effect on the life. Try to find life in moments but don't allow any moment to overshadow the whole life.

Dialogues of Raqsam were more than good, with finale part having the most of it. Aymal is a powerful writer when it comes to pen some high volume drama and this time was no difference. Right from the beginning till the very last, Aymal has put up a tremendous show in this regard. Much appreciation for this.

Just like my previous review (of episode 2) I would once again like to mention the most beautiful aspect of this novel. To me, these three parts were handled by Aymal with utmost authority, considering the way how she totally changed the mode from tragedy to romance and from melodrama to tragedy again. 10 on 10 for Aymal on this.

Overall, Raqsam is a good read with some very powerful dialogues penned by the author.

Friday, 19 May 2017

In Conversation with Aymal Raza- Exclusive Interview in Urdu

In Conversation with Aymal Raza- Exclusive Interview in Urdu

Aap sab ne Aymal Raza ka interview pasand kiya, hum aap ke shuker'guzaar hain. Aap ki farmaish per hum usi interview ko Urdu zaban mein aap ke samney pesh ker rahey hain. Umeed hai, aap ko humari kaawish pasand aey gi...























Tuesday, 16 May 2017

In Conversation with Aymal Raza- Exclusive Interview with Shoby

In Conversation with Aymal Raza- Exclusive Interview with Shoby


Shobywood: When did you started writing?

Aymal: I started writing since my childhood at a very tender age. Initially I wrote few stories for children which got published and I received praises for them. Then I shifted towards fiction. My first story for children was published back in the year 2008 for which I got third position in the competition and my first fiction was published in monthly digest Shuaa in 2014.

Shobywood: What is your writing for you?

Aymal: To me, my writing is just an inception and nothing else.

Shobywood: Do you read other writers (the old & new ones). Who is your favourite writer and who inspired you to write?

Aymal: Yes, I have read almost all of the writers, both the new & old ones. In fact I have read so many veteran writers including the likes of Bano Qudsiya, Ashfaq Ahmed, Mumtaz Mumfti, Mohammad Ilyas, Rajindher Singh Bedi, Prem Chand, Manto, Syed Mohammad Ashraf, Ilyas Ahmed, Seeta Devi, Jeelani Bano, Raam Laal, Ismat Chightai, Intezar Hussain and Quratul Ain Haider. Among the young ones, Umer Saeed, Elif Åžafak (Elif Shafaq, a Turkish writer) are my personal favourites. Their style of writing inspired me a lot.

As I had a craving for reading books, what should I say that who inspired me the most to write. However, when I read Raja Gidh, somewhere in my mind, it was like some stimulus was triggered. Hence it was decided that I have to write. The more I read Bano Qudiya, the more the decision got firmed. You may say that I have been writing by reading Bano Qudiya’s stories. Her stories taught me how to write.

Shobywood: How do you differentiate the old classical writers with those of our era?

Aymal: There is a lot of difference. Today, people write for earning, and in the mean course, the actual spirit of the story looks like tempered, whereas this phenomenon was not common with the earlier writers. I feel observational & analytical approach has diminished in the new writers. They are neither doing justice with the story nor with the characters.

Shobywood: In your stories, the society is always shown from a specific perspective. Do you like writing stories based on society only?

Aymal: We have so many colours of society. So much so that it always looks lesser in terms of volume, no matter how more we write for it. The society always astonishes us even if we look at it merely as a layman. You may say that I like writing on society. But its not like this that I want only to portray the society through my writing. The human psyche attracts me too. I love to write fantasy, horror, suspense. I don't want to be stereotyped. I am open towards all the innovation, tradition and periodic of creation.

Shobywood: The characters in your stories are always living and relate-able and yet you always connect them with the art of every corner of this world, just like what you did in Taveez e Hubb. Do you plan it before writing that you have to place certain elements in your story?

Aymal: You can say, yes, up to an extent. Actually there are diverse types of stories. For instance, there is a type of story what Manto sb used to pen and now we have the type of stories which we have to present after proper ornamentation. You have to embed certain essential ingredients. This is sometimes need of the hour and sometimes it is just a thirst of doing something unorthodox. Plus, I like if my characters are not stagnant. I like if they continue doing their bits. They should be engaged with different fields of the world. They should belong to various countries of the world. Doing so, the readers gets to know about new things of the world.

Shobywood: Your characters evolve after grasping so much of pain. I should rephrase it, they in fact re-discover themselves after going through some intense circumstances. From where you bring this much of pain & intensity in the characters?

Aymal: These are mere characters which are revealed to the imagination and then get transferred to the paper in the form of writing. To tell you honestly, I have nothing much to do in this regard. I feel, if you have pre-planned the pain or any certain phenomenon given to a specific character, it is fabrication. It looks artificial. To me, It is an atrocity with the characters. I believe, characters themselves tell you how to treat them.

Shobywood: Your character sketches & dialogues are very different from other writers and often they have a visible colour of foreign authors. Similarly, you use multi-cultural & multi-ethnic philosophy in your writings. Do you implement these things intentionally?

Aymal: I have read more of my own domestic literature more than others. My novel Taveez e Hubb has an influence of Umer Saeed’s Safaal Ger and it is not something unintentional. When I read Safaal Ger, I felt that it is an altogether fresh & new way to project in the field of novel writing. Then I decided to write my own novel on the same pattern. That is why I wrote Taveez e Hubb in the style of Safaal Ger.

In my other stories, you will feel a touch of Bano Qudiya’s works. I have learnt writing by reading her stories. She is my spiritual teacher. I feel there is a visible impact of her writing in my writings. I have an in-depth focus on dialogues, characterisation and projection. I think these three components are the backbone of any story.

Shobywood: Recently your novel Main, Mohabbat or Tum was published. This time, you chose to write a bit different than your usual style of writing. It was nice to see you with a soft romantic sort of read. But you are actually famous for stories like Taveez e Hubb and Piyaal Saaz. What sort of writing you enjoy the most?

Aymal: I like writing the likes of Piyaal Saaz and Taveez e Hubb but I think if you the reader will get bored if you keep on writing in the same pattern regularly. Earlier, writers had a specific school of thought and they used to write on one single pattern throughout the career. Bano Qudsiya was more into writing about human psyche. Ashfaq Ahmed has made the society his field of study. Mumtaz Mufti, Ismat Chughtai, in fact all of them write on one pattern. And the interesting thing is, this phenomenon is not only prevailing in our literature, in fact the foreign writers have also used one domain to write on. But if we look at the newly growing breed of writers, we can see that they are attempting multiple styles. A very recent example for the same is Elif Åžafak who used altogether different writing approaches in Namoos and Ishq Ke Chalees Asool. Sumaira Hameed of Khawateen Digest is another excellent example. Her novels Borshay, Ishq Amad o Mann, Yaaram all have been written in diverse styles and all of them are fantastic reads. I like comedy but I prefer to write tragedy.

Shobywood: Are your stories always a fiction or are they inspired from the reality?

Aymal: All of my stories are always fiction albeit one character of Piyaal Saaz (i.e. Misbah). This character is a real one, not only the name but also in its fate.

I have not yet written any story based on a real incidence but the characters I use are very relate-able and they are taken from the living society. Whatever you witness or read is always getting stored in your mind. When you perceive an idea about a story, then all the relevant phenomenon arrives with the same. Considering this thing, we can say that the pure fiction is also not a “complete perfect fiction”. It has some true components of society as well.

Shobywood: One thing that is specific to your stories is the absence of traditional hero-heroine stuff. I feel, you always sketch the story with real hard hitting author backed characters and script is always your real hero. Do you believe in the traditional hero-heroine thing or not?

Aymal: Everyone has a distinct style of writing. I feel, hero- heroine are not necessary for a story, it is more essential to have pivotal and I always give this “pivotal” component the most important place in the story. This “pivotal” can be anything. Hope, Courage, Will, Spark, Enlightening, Struggle, anything.

I am not saying that do not write stories with traditional hero-heroine sagas. Those who want to write, they are most welcome to write whatever they enjoy. Those who don’t want to attempt this, they should not. We have so many diverse topics in the world that even if you does not write on traditional hero-heroine stuff, you are still not short of the topics.

Shobywood: People have almost stopped reading now a days. Is it because we are short of good writers or readers?

Aymal: To be honest, we have shortage of both. However I feel we are more short of good readers today. Yes it is true that good writing is difficult to find in today’s literature, but look people do not read the classical old stuff too. Habit of reading is scarce now and libraries are getting desolated. Recently I was talking to the librarian of Punjab Library. He was saying that earlier we used to issue 1000 book on an average daily and now the quantity has dropped to 50 or 60. It is my own experience as well. Seven, eight years ago, I had to wait for one or two hours to get a book issued and now my heart gets lonely having seen these libraries vacant. Librarians are getting bored of no business and books are looking someone to come and collect them. There are many factors behind this, but I think misuse of latest technology has made us slack. We are doing worse with our own selves by giving a secondary thing the more priority.

Shobywood: Recently you launched your book Sooraj Ke Paar in the last year. What do you want to say about the book? What was the reaction of public and critics?

Aymal: Sooraj ke Paar is my fiction collection. I am delighted on its launch as it was already decided that my first book would be dedicated to my beneficent Ms. Umma tus Saboor. So with the launch of the book, my dream came true.

The fiction stories available in the book were already published in digest and I have always garnered praises over the same. Wherever I have received positive criticism, I have always tried to make my writing better.

Shobywood: How seriously you take the take of critics regarding your work? If someone’s take hurt you, how you react to them?

Aymal: Feedback is important but I shall write what I feel like writing. You can say that I am a bit stubborn in writing. I shall not modify my style or plot of the story on someone else’s recommendation.

I have not mind anyone’s feedback till date. However sometimes, we come across sort of a feedback based on a single point, without understanding the actual spirit & essence of the story. Then I wonder why something is getting criticised which is not actually endorsed in the story.

Shobywood: Do you like writing for films or dramas?

Aymal: Off course. I like to write both however my foremost priority is novel writing.

Shobywood: Which is your most favourite character and why?

Aymal: The Nigaar of Piyaal Saaz. There are many reason which I would not like to disclose.

Shobywood: Which of your story or character you would love to see developed into a film or drama?

Aymal: For the time being, I guess no one. I wouldn’t allow any of my characters to be dramatised considering the prevailing conditions of our domestic dramas are not suitable enough. Dramas that are being made in our country is plagued with hast.

Shobywood: If Aymal Raza was not a writer, what she would have been?

Aymal: Aymal was bound to be a writer no matter what. Only if ALLAH PAK has destines something else for me.

Shobywood: What sort of writing you personally enjoy the most and what do you wish to write?

Aymal: I like to write tragedy novels. And I want to write almost every sort of thing. Horror, suspense, fantasy, romance, classical literature, Itinerary almost every known genre of writing.

Shobywood: Short Fiction or Novel? Which one is more difficult to write?

Aymal: I think fiction is more difficult. It is immensely difficult to elaborate the wholesomeness of something with all its charm within few strokes. I think once you are done with short fiction, it becomes easier to write a novel. But after novel, you can get assistance for only writing a story and you have to once again strive to go back from a story to fiction. This is my own perspective.

Shobywood: Your fans want to know that you have not come up with an episodic after Piyaal Saaz. For how long they have to wait for this?

Aymal: Novel itself tells us, when it has to be emerged on the papers. It itself gives you an insight that the time has come for its existence. If something sparks in your mind, it starts triggering you. It ends up having penned. It itself gives a material entity to its spirit. Writer has to complete it as soon as possible. It has only one other aspect that you keep on waiting with story sketches in your mind for the right time.

Shobywood: What are your hobbies other than writing?

Aymal: I have many hobbies. I love painting. I do this in my free times, which are usually not available. I like music too. I like singers of Lebanon & Turkey. I like the songs of Adam, Umer Wahab, Nancy Ajzam, Haifa, Serence, Muraad. I also like cooking but since I have started writing, I have not tried anything new. There are many other hobbies as well.

Shobywood: Shobywood is the only Pakistani blog where Poetry & other forms of literature are also getting ample limelight along with film & entertainment industry. What would you like to say about my blog?

Aymal: It is a very positive blog. We can make social media productive but not much is being done in this regard here. We have only a handful of Urdu websites whereas our neighbouring country is far more ahead of us in this aspect. It is astonishing to see that they have so many personal channels. We all should focus and do some combine effort for the same. Shobywood is an excellent step in this regard.

Shobywood: Any message for your fans?

Aymal: Work hard and do it with such a passion that your work reaches to the premium heights. Learn how to smile and forgive. Doing so, not only the life will be become easier but also you will achieve tangible success. Always belive on your struggle. Remember this quote of IMAM ALI (asws):

Ho Sakta hai aap ki qismat aap ka saath na de lakin aap ko aap ki mehnat ka phal na miley, yeh nahi ho sakta.

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Saturday, 6 May 2017

Raqsam (Aymal Raza)- Episode 2 Review by Shoby

Raqsam (Aymal Raza)- Episode 2 Review by Shoby

Brody: You alright?
Carrie: Are you?
(Starts raining)
Brody: Dont leave me like this... All alone... In the rain...
Carrie: You will be fine...

#Homeland #Season1

Remember the first emotional meeting of Brody and Carrie in Homeland? While reading how Ajram came close to Minaal reminded me of that and obviously I am taking too much leverage in saying this.

Minaal meets Ajram and this guy knows every known trick in the books to lure the audience. No matter how talkative you are, there is one damn person in the world who possess the power to make you silent. A silence that speaks much louder than noise. Pakistan mein sab isey kehtey they ke is ki zaban qainchi ki tarha chalti hai... Ajram ki to kai so qainchiyon ki tarha chal rahi thi. 

Some people believe it to be their utmost duty to make you realise that you are still one step behind them in the game. Minaal gets a project of interior decor and the night of the celebrations turned into yet another evening of sorrow when she saw Doris walking on the ramp, making Sikander proud.  It was her night and she was there to get the credit of every great thing but the things are changed. Sikander was also present there and obviously he was also happy to see Minaal's success but taste of the victory has turned sour as Doris has stolen the scene with a big wicked smile on her face. Meanwhile it can be clearly seen that somewhere within herself, ice is melting for Minaal binte Surayya.

So Minaal is melting not only for her father but also for Ajram. He is marking quite a visible stamp on her. Pyara hona bohat acha lagta hai, khas tor per tab jab kisi ko laga jaey... Love has the tendency to modify you. It literally can. Same is happening to our grief struck enraged girl. She has finally found a buddy.

Now lets us pause here for a while and discuss Ajram. This happy go lucky, all goes well nice charming uni fellow likes street dancing and therefore he is learning dance from the instructor Saint. I feel his character is something like that of Aman from Kal Ho Na Ho. The more he provides the fun element to the story, the more it looks like that he is going to reveal a deadly disastrous news soon. 

On the street festival, Ajram gifts her a traditional Greek Garland. On that very night, Sikander confesses all the bad, he has done with Surayya and her children. They are coming nearer. She is becoming happier. And then all of the sudden everything got changed. 

Us ki aankhen weeran ho gai... Sara sheher weeran ho gaya. Seems like Ajram is deliberately avoiding her for unknown reasons citing various lame excuse of being abroad for a short film and then came the biggest twist in the story. Ajram asks her for a dinner and there she found him, not as her boy friend, but as the (proclaimed) fiance of none other than Doris.

Hats off to Aymal for switching gears and going back-forth by making some real interesting twists in the plot. First she managed so well to divert the focus of the readers from a revenge filled Minaal-Sikander saga to a little warm Minaal- Ajram love story and then just with a mere click, she turned the tables once again and beautifully shifted the focus to the same old siblings hate/-revenge drama. Apparently Doris has acquired the very best (in fact the only) of what Minaal had.

From the story-line, I am getting a feel that this one seems to be getting unzipped in a nice smooth manner. Aymal is this time effortlessly telling us a tale in simplest of the manners. She is not trying to do anything extra and just focusing on producing a fairly fluent narrative. I am  predicting a happily living ever after sort of finale with a touch of family drama at the end. Let's wait and watch what is coming next in Raqsam.

Saturday, 22 April 2017

Raqsam (Aymal Raza)- Episode 1 Review by Shoby

Raqsam (Aymal Raza)- Episode 1 Review by Shoby

J.K. Rowling said, "“Numbing the pain for a while will make it worse when you finally feel it.” (Harry Potter and the Goblet of Fire).

Do you have any idea, what would have been the psychological stimulus behind someone who does not want to even give a space of his or her parental father's name as a surname post his/ her own name. Minaal bint e Suraya Kausar... The very first phrase of Aymal Raza's latest novel titled Raqsam sets the tune for the readers. The titled managed extremely well to garner my attention. I liked it. 

She was a brought up by her mother and only she knows what it is like to be when someone asks questions like where is your father and when he is coming back to you. So all this has built up Minaal's personality and no point to guess that now she is at the verge of point that she does not even like to have her father's name after her own. You may call her behaviour a bit abnormal but I feel if someone acts normal in abnormal circumstances, he is basically abnormal.

Doris on the other hand is luckiest enough to have an ever loving father. Just like many other happy families, they are also cherishing a beautiful family life with a "mandatory" touch of sibling's candid fight. This one is another beautiful all-going-good family. I loved the way, how Doris's father guided her to stay away from drugs. He did it with absolute ease without being preachy and look it has an excellent effect on the girl. If this is how our parents guide us without breaking the nerves in the reality, believe me, it would have been heavens.

OK Coming back to this Doris story... It seems somewhere she can never digest something and that is to share her father with anyone else, not even with her very own brothers. She intentionally teases them and gains personal benefits which quite clearly states that she totally misuses her father's love.

Kabhi kabhi zarurat se zeyada khayal or mohabbat aap ko mazeed gham'zada ker deta hai kiyo ke is ki wajoohat se aap ko nafrat hoti hai. Self-pity shatters your self confidence thus ultimately results in absolute unhappiness and Minaal is surely going through the same phase.

Fact of the matter was Sikander married Suraya Kausar (Minaal's mother) just because of extreme emotional pressure constructed by his mother, however he initially denied it straight away. Not much to the surprise, after demise of his mother, he left his wife and moved abroad to enjoy his life with his first wife.

Her mother's condition is getting worse and she has one last wish to meet her husband for the very last time and Minaal has committed to provide her with this grand opportunity. She has managed to contact Sikander, the mutual father of Doris, Ans, Ahad and the newly revealed breaking news Asad & Minaal binte Surayya. This is how dreamland destroys, Doris is not the only princess of Papa-Land.

Sikander returns to Pakistan, only to find his wife dead , however he takes Minaal & Asad with him abroad. Important thing is, Minaal is no way in the mood of forgiving his actual father for what he did with his wife and children and now get ready for the fight of the century. It is Rapunzel vs Cinderella. It is Doris vs Minaal. Sikander Ahmed ke ghar mein Minaal binte Suraya ke alfaaz maazi ki sari talkhiyan liye, lalkaar ki tarah goonjney lagey...

Lance Armstrong said, "Pain is temporary. It may last a minute, or an hour, or a day, or a year, but eventually it will subside and something else will take its place. If I quit, however, it lasts forever." In the case of Minaal, revenge & destruction has now taken place of this pain, which she has been bearing for all those years.

And the story continues with Tom & Jerry fights between Sikander's two self obsessed daughters. Where Doris has an edge of being papa's sweety, the other one is not at all lean, as she is the wounded lioness, the one & only ruthless Minaal binte Suraya. Episode ends with the new entry, i.e. Minaal meets Ajram.

So the first episode of Raqsam was all about the misery that Minaal has gone through her life and a dictatorship sort of reign that Doris has enjoyed being the "only" daughter of the Family. Tension are inevitable as Doris meets with Minaal. I feel Minaal is here not to conquer anything, in fact she is trying to destroy the actual peace that Sikander has enjoyed with his family. Obviously no one can find this behaviour a justified ones but again, it is coming from someone who has suffered so much in her life.

This one is a very simple story of a kid going wrong courtesy parent's misadventures and I have a strong feeling that it will surely end up on a very nice soothing note. I predict a happily living ever-after ending here. Wait for the next episode.

Thursday, 20 April 2017

Chance To Win Aymal Raza's Latest Book...

Chance To Win Aymal Raza's Latest Book...



The news that Aymal Raza is coming exclusively on #Shobywood for a one of its kind interview is surely making quite a serious buzz. Everyone seems to be super excited and we know all the fans of Aymal are super excited for the interview.

Let's enhance the volume of excitement and make this event even more memorable for you. Here, we are providing all of you an awesome opportunity to ask any question from your favourite author. Now you can ask whatever your heart feels to Ms. Aymal Raza and not only this but the surprise package is, if your question is liked by Aymal, it will be featured in the interview with your name and city and this not ends here.

If your question is selected and answered by the author, you will be presented with her latest story collection book Sooraj Ke Paar. Now this is the real treat for you. Isn't it?

So what are you waiting for. In case, you have any question that you think should be asked to Aymal Raza, just inbox your question to us either at Ms. Aymal Raza's official Facebook page or Shobywood's Facebook page and get a chance to win signed book by Ms. Aymal Raza.

Monday, 10 April 2017

Famous Writer Aymal Raza's Exclusive Interview... Coming Soon Only at Shobywood

Famous Writer Aymal Raza's Exclusive Interview... Coming Soon Only at Shobywood



Purshootam, Saya e Gautam, Ibn e Maryam se keh do, KHUDA ke maujzey se... These lines still roam around my mind and give me chills since I have read them for the very first time. She is one of those very few writers who have achieved so much actually in the beginning of their writing career. The reason behind her immense fan following is her unorthodox writing style that makes her stand out from the lot. Reason why I praise her writing is because she is beyond these Saas-Bahu sagas. Whenever she writes it turns out to be either Taveez e Hubb or Piyaal Saaz. She is our very favorite fiction writer Ms. Aymal Raza.

All of her fans must have questions regarding how she writes & what does she think about her writing. Beside this, her fans would have been eager to know her own take on today's literature being written or read and they must have been looking for a place, where they can ask their favorite writer what they want to know about her. If this is the case with you, worry not, as Shobywood has the solution.

Believe it or not but yes the news is true. Ms. Aymal is coming very soon at our very own blog #Shobywood for an exclusive chit-chat. As many other first, this would be the very first time that she will be giving interview for an online global blog.

I thank Ms. Aymal for taking out time from her very busy schedule for the interview, which you all will surely be reading within few days. I know you all are going to kill me if I say, please wait. But believe me, you have to wait a little for this mega treat and I bet, this one is really worth waiting.

Keep visiting Shobywood for the updates.

Saturday, 11 March 2017

Bharam (Aymal Raza)- Story Review by Shoby

Bharam (Aymal Raza)- Story Review by Shoby

D.H. Lawrence said, “A woman has to live her life, or live to repent not having lived it.” (Lady Chatterley's Lover). Hasn't Lawrence explored a universal truth. Women are difficult to understand. Sorry, I should have said that this specie is immensely impossible to understand. At one point of time, they can be the the most dreadful of the entities who can devastate a generation of sorts and on another side, she would dare to do anything just for the sake of making her commitment tangible.

Aymal Raza has explored a general yet very interesting trait of the female fraternity in this short story. A women can take whatever difficulty she has to face in her life. She will go side by your side and will never make a complaint about anything bad coming in in front of her. She can bear any unprecedented incident in the journey of life, be it poverty, sickness or anything, however there is one oint which is beyond her tolerance level. She can never tolerate the betrayal. Danka V. talked about the same, “What irritated me most in that entire situation was the fact that I wasn’t feeling humiliated, or annoyed, or even fooled. Betrayal was what I felt" (The Unchosen Life).

Zubaida's married life started in the way just like the normal relationships starts. With colours of happiness of present and hopes for bright future. After having laid major portion of life with each other, a good 35 years to count, she parted ways, the reason best known to her only as she was not willing to disclose what happened in actual and the finale discloses a reasoning which takes the story on an entirely different level. Aik bharam aurat ka hota hai or aik dawa mard ka... Mujh mein itni himmat n ahi ke usey be'parda karu... Lakin us ne mera bharam tor diya hai...

Divorce, this word itself is haunting and Zubaida's condition was saying it loud that she has been divorced by the husband. Sir sabz zameen per saem or thaur ka safaida nazar aney laga... Excellent depiction of a recently divorced shattered women. Band bazar ki tarha weeran or udaas aurat...

Women can never be predicted and you can never assume what they actually have in their mind. She left her husband, (Fine... Acceptable) but see what she was up to, Main un larkon ke paas her bhi giz nahi jaon gi... Khoon to apney baap ka hi hai un ki ragon mein bhi... This shows how badly hurt she was from inside due to the behavioural attitude of her husband.

Aymal's writing flourishes quite beautifully in the narrative and there are many interesting one-liners which can seriously be termed as "Proverbs". She delved into the personality of Zubaida not only as a faithful wife but she also discovered many more aspects of her life especially her being a mother and a sister.

While talking to Khurram, out of no where she asks her Kaun hai woh larki??? What a true rendition of how a mother can gauge what is going inside her own children. Similarly, see how she reacts as a sister, the volume of trust she shows for her brother, a reliance which she can never have on anyone else except her very own brother. She not only came straight to him but also tells him the factual cause of leaving her husband. Well done Aymal Raza.

On the whole, Bharam is a fantastic short read and I can confidently say that it has that typical Aymal's touch in it. Read the complete story on Aymal's recently launched story collection "Sooraj Ke Paar".

Wednesday, 15 February 2017

Chup (Aymal Raza)- Fiction Review by Shoby

Chup (Aymal Raza)- Fiction Review by Shoby

First story of Aymal Raza's recently launched story collection Sooraj Ke Paar is Chup (The Silence). Let us analyse, what the story has in it for the readers.

In George Orwell's words, Each generation imagines itself to be more intelligent than the one that went before it, and wiser than the one that comes after it. Generation gap is something at truly defines the complexities in relationship between two persons. In this fast, pacey world, we usually are no more interested in taking care what our elders have to say. In fact, we categorically deny giving them due share of importance. May be this is hte reason why much of their feelings die within themselves.

Sadia, a wanna-be writer is striving so hard to construct a character sketch for an upcoming story competition but who can pay attention to this damn artistic work if someone as talkative as her Daadi was present to make a mess of everything. Her grand mother was fond of telling stories and she has had enough of this. So getting really irritated by her Daadi's long narration, she one day spoke out loud how badly she wanted her to remain silent and then Saadia found what she was searching for. Silence... But this silence was full of screams...

Scream of Silence:

Andheyara, 
Jeewan ko Sooni Raeyn Karey Hai.
Mere ander ki khamoshi
Oonchi oonchi awazon mein
Bayn karey hai

(Poet: Shahbaz Ali Naqvi)

Most of the times, we do not realise the importance of something in our life unless we are deprived of that very thing. And when it comes to living beings, it is needless to say that human beings cant live in isolation what-so-ever. They need someone who is a listener and they need someone who is their talking partner. I feel somewhere in the heart, both of them (Saadia and her grandmother) were looking for a listener cum speaker but the problem arise when quotient of one trait lead the other.

This short fiction is written in a very innocent way. Aymal has tried top kept the things pretty simple by using just two characters (ignoring a small cameo of father) in the narrative. I feel, Aymal has achieved the real objective within these three, four pages of writing, i.e. to highlight the importance of relationship.

Saturday, 4 February 2017

Sooraj Ke Paar (Aymal Raza)- Introduction by Shoby

Sooraj Ke Paar (Aymal Raza)- Introduction by Shoby




Famous Scottish fiction writer Iain M. Banks said, “The trouble with writing fiction is that it has to make sense, whereas real life doesn't.” I believe this really sums up all. To say, writing fiction is difficult is a very mediocre term. To encompass what is really going on in the living society and writing it in an absolute make-believe manner is something marvellous and demands to be cherished.

Today, we have a handsome number of writers who are doing their best in their respective capacities and Aymal Raza is undoubtedly one of those who has invariably come up with diverse, sensitive & intriguing writing pieces in the recent times. After writing, magnificent novels Taveez e Hubb and Piyal Saaz, she has just launched her latest collection of short stories titled as Sooraj Ke Paar.

I believe, Aymal needs no introduction and so does her stories. She is one of those writer who does not want to reinvent the wheel times and again. She has always come up with assorted & novel ideas and has successfully executed them in a meaningful distinguished way. She really knows the secret recipe of writing a good fiction.

The book Sooraj Ke Paar consists of seventeen short stories that looks like a galaxy of their own ingrained beautifully. Every story is a separate universe with characters speaking their heart out of what they are going through. 

This feature is just a a teaser of what we have in the store for us in this collection. You will surely get to read my reviews on each of these stories very soon at my blog. Meanwhile, I suggest you not to wait and get your own copy of the book to have the real taste of this nice productive read.

Monday, 9 January 2017

Main, Mohabbat Or Tu (Aymal Raza)- Novel Review by Shoby

Main, Mohabbat Or Tu (Aymal Raza)- Novel Review by Shoby

Daniel had only one option to listen all the tragedies of this not-so-downtrodden dashing-rich Jibran in this one of its kind Theme park. From losing a bet of merely 500 Dollar (not a big deal obviously :p ) to getting blackmailed on the hands of his very own mother to marry the girl (Maria) that he used to love in his teens only. You just count on your finger and it was not possible that this very problem has not occurred with this young-smart chap. And if anything was left to make his life worst, guess what he got impinged with (not so real) Cinderella (for whom he was just praying to meet anytime sooner in this real living world) in the theme park... (Poorest he)...

Larkiyon ke libaas aisey hi hotey hain... Un ki hi tarah hassas... (Ahhhh this one strike the chord correctly Aymal)...

Rumi was basically an antecedent struck poor girl who was doning the avatar of Cinderella in the theme park in order to give her (single-parent) mother a helping hand and the first attire that she was asked to do was of a bear... Or chhohiya ne bhaalu ban'na pasand ker liya  (#Feeling super sad for her) :-(

Bhalu ke libaas ka ooperi hissa muskurata hua sa tha... Dekhney wala yeh gumaan bhi nahi ker sakta tha ke is muskuratey chehrey ke ander wala kis qarb se guzer raha hai... And the truth is "When the king gets depressed, he doesn't call for his wife. He doesn't call for the cook. He calls for the court jester." Richard Simmons

Anyways, as a token of punishment, Rumi asked for the indemnity of 150 dollars from Jibran on account of making her Cinderella costume messy and the amount was just about perfect for Rumi to spend some bucks for the shopping. After all, she & her mummy would have deserved at least this much taste of joy courtesy (looted) money. :p

The magician's scene was real funny especially when he hits her with the stick. All the dialogues between Jibran and his mother are written sweetly with nice dose of humour embedded within.

They say, Karma is what does the justice, so 150 dollar indemnity was equally (read more brutally) replied by a 300 dollar compensation as bad-luck struck Rumi unlickly breaks Jibran's expecnsive cell phone in the university. And Aymal Raza was at her satirical best when she penned the dialogue:

Rumi: Agar koi aera ghera ghar aa ker aap ki beti ke khilaf kuch ulta seedha boley to kiya aap yaqeen ker len gi???
Faryal: Main sir phor du gi...
Rumi: Well done Ammi...
Faryal: Us ka nahi... Tumhara

Jibran arranges his cartoon- themed birthday party and Rumi along with her complete crew had to go there but right before the cake cutting ceremony, she falls and her heads gets removed and her identity is revealed in front of all. Enraged & infuriated Rumi slaps Jibran and breaks the things at the place. From nowhere, Aymal Raza has managed to pull over yet again the same heartbreaking melancholic aura in Main Mohabbat Or Tu, which has always been a fortay of her writing. See, how bereaved Rumi's character looks in these scenes.

Rumi pays back his 300 dollars in university and thre onward starts a story of love-hate relationship between the two. Needless to mention that Maria (Jibran's to be fiance') enters and exits the story without making certain noise and so does Rumi's (assumed dead) father. Rest should be read in the story itself.

Aymal has told this very sensitive story write from the heart. This time her writing was a bit different as she tried her hand on a more light-hearted note with chunks of suitable situational comedy but I still feel the overall ambience of the story was gloomy. It was a forlorn tale sugar-coated beautifully with burlesque. I loved the beginning portion of the novel very much, where Rumi was shown getting ready to re-do Cinderella. It somehow reminded me of William Wordsworth's famous poem Daffodils.

Aymal is one of the best in today's Urdu literature world, when  it comes to one-liners and she proved her mettle in this department once again. Watch how Jibran's mom sums it all regarding her own theory about fairy tale's leading characters:

Jo humari ankhon ko bhali lagti hain... Wohi humarey liye Rapunzel, Cindrella, Caty, Barbie, Frozen ya Snowwhite hoti hain...

While reading the novel, I could not repel the thoughts of Raj Kapoor's epic film Mera Naam Joker... No there is no similarity between the two except the one thing that protagonist of both (film & the novel) had to do certain jester sort of makeover in order to earn their livelihood. Apart from this, Aymal managed to bring the same grief-stricken atmosphere through her words which was present all over in the movie.

To tell you honestly, culminating part of the story was a typical living happy ever after sort of ending which was just OK considering the fact that story started off with humour and these sit-coms require a nice made-for-each-other type of all-goes-well ending.

I don't know, but I feel something was visibly lacking somewhere in the ending. May be, a couple of more scenes where Jibran would have put some more effort to persuade Rumi would have done wonders but again I can understand that writer must have taken the lenght of the story in her notice.

However, one thing that really was all over my mind while reading the ending part of Mai, Mohabbat or Tu was my this one couplet:

Aao ankhon ko mal ke dekhey hum
Tu ne khuahish saraab ker di hai (Shahbaz Ali Naqvi)

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